Inertia

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Title: Inertia
Author: Amelia C. Gormley
Cover Artist: Kerry Chin
Publisher: Self
Buy Link: Inertia (Impulse)
Genre: Contemporary
Length: 46k
Rating: 4.25 stars out of 5

A Guest Review by Cryselle

Review Summary: A well-written unfolding of attraction and difficult issues.

Blurb

By the age of 21, down-to-earth Detroit handyman Derrick Chance had lost everyone he’d ever loved. Too worn-out and wounded to play the dating game, he wrote off the possibility of romance or even just sex. Living alone in the old house his grandparents had left him, with only his dog and a few close friends for companionship, he refused to consider himself lonely, or let himself wonder what he might be missing. He knew who he was and where he was headed. His life was comfortable, organized, predictable, and best of all, risk-free. He was content.

Until the day he installed some shelves for accountant Gavin Hayes. A contradictory combination of confidence and uncertainty, Gavin’s shameless flirtations drew him in with an intensity Derrick had never known he longed for.

As undeniable as the force of gravity, he abandoned ten years of self-imposed solitude and found himself falling rapidly for Gavin in defiance of all his usual slow and methodical ways.

But Gavin carried wounds of his own. Fresh from an emotionally abusive relationship that ended with a potentially dangerous betrayal, his future was far from certain. Derrick would have to decide if his rediscovered passion was worth taking the chance of another loss.

Review

I first encountered this author when she submitted a hot little ficlet for a prompt picture, and after reading that, I was delighted to find out there’d be more. A lot more. Inertia is the first of three stories with Gavin and Derrick, and I’m looking forward to the next one already.

Derrick’s a loner, huddling in on himself to prevent any more hurt coming his way: at a young age he’s already had more heartbreak and loss than many people coming up on retirement. It’s easier not to take risks or get involved, a dog and some good friends ought to be enough. But Gavin does a come-closer-maybe that Derrick finds intriguing, and in spite of himself, he gradually does get involved.

Gavin comes with plenty of baggage, which unfolds slowly. Maybe he’s not really relationship material for Derrick, maybe he’s a bad idea even for a weekend’s amusement. Or maybe, he’s worth it.

Gavin has issues guaranteed to poke Derrick’s “no way” button, but his combination of flirting, honesty, and a bit of vulnerability make him extremely alluring, and Derrick comes closer in spite of his best intentions. A scene where Derrick goes out on what he tells himself will be an aimless drive “just to clear his mind” swings him like a pendulum between “not in this lifetime” and “right now.” Very nicely done, and just lovely when he finally arrives at Gavin’s door.

This story does have a number of serious issues to address, and takes none of them lightly, but it never devolves into an angst-fest. Instead, we have two grown men making themselves a tiny bit vulnerable with each revelation, and each understands that the other could bolt at a moment’s notice. Derrick’s the man most likely to disappear from inability to deal, and tells himself that he daren’t come to care for someone who could put him through the wringer and then be gone.

An atrocious ex with no face time hangs like smog over the couple, and several issues relating to him get explored, though not resolved. It smells like sequel bait, which is fine with me; I want to know how they play out. For the moment it’s enough to see Derrick and Gavin come together in spite of the obstacles.

A few things bothered me: I wasn’t entirely convinced that Derrick could sleepwalk through his twenties quite as completely as he was portrayed, and I was also concerned about Gavin’s stability, since he hadn’t been ex’ed from his ex all that long. A friend from the past popped in from Central Casting long enough to make some cogent points and then disappeared; she didn’t have much to say that couldn’t have been handled by another friend with a more ongoing role in the story, but perhaps I’m being too picky here.

This is Amelia Gormley’s first book, and in spite of a couple niggles, I think it’s a strong and entertaining piece (I accidentally took a long lunch at work because I was engrossed). The writing is very fluid and the sex scenes very hot, and when the heck is Book Two out? 4.25 stars

8 thoughts on “Inertia

  1. ailish

    Thanks for the review Cryselle,
    I have been thinking about this one , but I think your review will finally make me take the plunge and buy it.
    I was a bit worried about there being an angst fest, since I don’t like those!
    I saw the author lowered the price of this book since the next one has been written, so I guess that’s another sign I need to get this one! :grin:

    1. Cryselle Post author

      The hard issues are balanced well, I thought. I hate stories where they turn broody and whiny.

  2. Raine

    I’m going to investigate this one too, thank you as I hadn’t come across it before. :smile:

    1. Cryselle Post author

      If the author hadn’t come along to do the prompt pic story, I might never have found her. Click on the link above, you’ll get a *nice* taste of her work.

  3. Hunter Frost

    I’m a sucker for loner stories. I’m going to have to try this one. Thanks for the review!

  4. Larissa

    This is a great review! You made me want to pick up the book, despite me trying to cut down buying books with characters that have been abused. It drives me insane. ;-) but that’s me :P

    1. Cryselle Post author

      One thing I liked about the handling of the abuse issue is that Gavin didn’t stick around to be driven into the ground. He found his strength and got out fairly fast, and could recognize the abuse for what it was. The last two past-abuse stories I read didn’t work out so well.

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